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What is your name : dean rudolph
Who do you want the poem written for: my beautiful wife Tanya
Why do you want the poem written: my wife's having mixed feelings about us due to a long separation caused by my current two year deployment and because of the heartaches I've caused in the past. Before our sons, my wife was crazy about me and was madly in love with me and I took it for granted and am truly sorry for that. I want her to be able to love me again like she did then and know that I have my whole life to make up for my misdeeds and pursue her happiness. I want her to know that she and our sons have completed my life and I can't ever picture my life without them in it. I also want her to know that I realize that my hesitation to open up to her, and my past dishonesty are the reasons for her mixed feelings and that will change cause I do not want to lose her. I want her to be able to truly forgive me
What are the key messages you would like to send: I just want her to know I'm truly sorry for the dishonesty and heartaches I've caused in the past. I want her to know I realize just how much she means to me. I want her to know that she's changed me into a better person. I want her to know that she and our sons mean the world to me and that ohana (means family in Hawaiian) is forever. that they are my everything. I want her to know how awed I am of her with the way she's balancing a demanding military career and parenthood by herself while I've been deployed for the past 18 months and the next 6 months as well. I want her to know that I'm proud of her as a soldier, a mother, and wife. I also want to remind her that I want to raise our sons together side by side.
Do you have any funny, sad, happy, embarrassing or otherwise memorable moments that you would like to share: most embarrassing and funniest would be the time we were dating and her mom walked in her barracks room unannounced and caught me naked in her bed. she told her mom that I'm from hawaii and am not used to wearing clothes.
Happiest would be our frequent long dinners and conversations at Denny's (our favorite late nite eatery) just sitting there talking about us, our friends,the future, about everything and anything.Earlier this summer when we went kayaking at North Shore by ourselves with the turtles was quite memorable.Saddest would be earlier the fist week of this month when she said she still loves me but may not in love with me anymore cause she's been thinking about all the heartache I caused her and that she needed time to think about our future together and it wasn't looking too good.And earlier this summer when my dad passed away and I asked her not to accompany me to his funeral.
Do you have any other comments or thoughts: I'm trying everything to save our marriage and life together from across the ocean and would be eternally grateful if you can help me with this.My unit's been kind enough to authorize me leave next month so we can work things out. Just can't wait to go back home and hopefully regain her trust and love.
What style of poem would you prefer (happy, sad, romantic etc.): sad and romantic
Please choose which package you would prefer:Deluxe
Do you have any last comments or thoughts: She's currently in the Army's Primary Leadership Course and won't graduate till the third of next month. I want her to know how proud I am of her accomplishment and am sorry for not being able to be there for hers like she was for mine. I also have a cd with a song I'd like to put in the package. Also, I'd like to add a dozen roses with the package if that's not too much to ask for. I want her to be able to feel my love for her through this poem.thank you in advance for your assistance.
| Hello, my beautiful wife, Tanya, these words are just for you, because I'm proud of who you are, and I'm very proud of what you do. And I know you're having mixed feelings, they're not helped by our time spent apart, so I thought I'd share a few thoughts, and give you some words, straight from the heart. I also know that there's a distance between us, that's greater because of the heartaches of my past, but I want these words to close our gap, and I've got a feeling that they're going to last. Firstly, I just wanted to say "I love you", I've never really said just how wonderful you are, but if my love for you were a distance, then it would be further than the furthest star. I know you used to be crazy about me, but that was before our sons came along, I took you and your love for granted, and now I need many rights to undo the wrong. I am so very, very, very sorry, my tears are now dripping into the dirt, I didn't know what I did, I was a fool, I'm so sorry for causing you all that hurt. I want you to love me again like you did, so that I can love you for the rest of my life, I'll spend that time making up to you, I'll spend that time being proud of my wife. All I'll ever want is your happiness, for I love you with my very heart and soul, you and the boys have made me complete, yes, you are the ones that make completely whole. And I can't imagine a future without you, if I try, I see only blackness, only dark, I need our eternal flame to keep on burning, I need us, once again, to find our spark. I know that I've been hesitant to open up, and now here's my heart, open, center stage, I want us to rewrite our glorious future, I need you to be there on every single page. Look, I know I've been dishonest in the past, but now I'm going to play it straight down the line, I will change because I don't want to lose you, I know what I had, I know what was once mine. I'm truly sorry for the lies and heartaches, and because of you, I will be a better man, our Ohana is forever, for eternity, for infinity, so starting today, to keep that, I'll do just what I can. Because I know now that you're my everything, the most valuable treasure on this planet earth, and I for one, know your true and honest value, I know exactly what your love is really worth. You somehow manage to balance your life, a military career and parenthood, all on your own, and I'm proud of you, soldier, proud of you, mother, and because you're my wife, I've undoubtedly grown. Your mom can even walk in on us unannounced, (it's OK, I'm from Hawaii and not used to wearing any clothes), and we can share many more great times at Denny's, we can even find some more turtles, I suppose. And once more, together, I want to be an Ohana, I want to raise our sons, you and me, side by side, because I know I couldn't have picked a finer partner, I know I couldn't - even if I'd tried. I'm so proud of all your achievements, I'm sorry I wont be there on your graduation day, just know that I'll be there with you in spirit, now, I do have just one last thing to say: I'm sorry I didn't ask you to come to Dad's funeral, I'm sorry, I was so inconsiderate, I was so unkind, please forgive me, I obviously wasn't myself, as you can imagine, I had an awful lot on my mind. But I do know that Dad would have forgiven me, and that he'd want us to live out our lives together, because he, above all else, knows you're the one, and he also knows that Ohana, means forever and ever. |
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