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Losing a girlfriend through drink, a poem to ask for another chance.
Full Name: Todd
Who do you want the poem written for?: Lacie
Why do you want the poem written ?: we started off as love at first sight at a party at matt's house she was dancing in front of the stero and i normally do not just walk up to someone and talk to them but i knew i had to get her number b/c she was the one for me. Tt began a little rocky at the beginning b/c she holds her friends tight. but then our love grew like i have never experinced before. it
went great for a little over a year. but my drinking and what i did while
drinking scared and hurt her very bad. She never once opened up to me and told me how she felt about it. Instead she let it build up and it tore us apart. She is a
very strong girl for not wanting to give me a second chance. She won't try it
again b/c she is afraid that i have not or will not change she does not know that
i have quit drinking. she does not want to hurt like she is now ever again. but i
promise i know i have changed, this is the one time i have lost something worth
dying over b/c of a little alcohol. and it has made me despise even wanting to
see a beer. i want her to under stand the hurting i am feeling from loosing her
over something so foolish. i am hurting very baddly not just over loosing her but
also mostly from hurting her this bad.i love this girl more than words will ever
say.....
she says she has a lot to get over and time alone is what will fix it if time
alone works at all.
Key Messages: the butterflies i got when i was around her when our love
was young. they were so bad that it would make me feel sick and i hardly could
ever eat around her it took a while before i could.
Also the burning that went through me when we said i love you.
Also no matter what she will always be the one in my heart.
explain how things always get bad but if you love each other enough and work
through your problems together it will only make it better or always make you
stronger.
I want the chance to mend our problems by showing her the new me not by her
waiting. That seems like the only way.
Memorable Moments: we made love for the first time at her house when she
stayed out of school on a beautiful Febuary day.
Just sitting alone together watching movies, fooling around, and talking.
we were in the mountains and went ice skating at Ober Gatlinburg.
the night i told her that i love her late one night on the phone. we both would
not get off of it til' i finally said it.
Other Comments: I want the chance to mend our problems by showing her the new me not by her waiting. That seems like the only way.
Style: sad (or maybe sad at first then go to the happy times.)
Package Type: Deluxe
This was the first draft:
Another Start
| There are certain times in life, when you wish that the clocks went both ways, because then you could turn them back, and erase some of the more regrettable days. And that's exactly the way that I feel, I know I've been stupid and that I've done wrong, but now I've found a different hymn-sheet, at last, I'm starting to sing a different song. Because the old lyrics weren't going anywhere, and I knew that they'd take me down the drain, and I knew that if I'd kept on drinking, then I'd be drinking again and again. So, I've decided to stop. Full stop. Stop - just like that, I was tired of feeling stupid, in truth, I was tired of being a twat. So today is the first day of the rest of my life, and now all that's left is to repair what's undone, because I need your sunshine in my life, in every way, you are my morning sun. For me, it was truly love at first sight, but I guess this should come as no surprise, but I knew that I'd fallen for you, the very first time I looked into your eyes. And we were a little rocky at first, but then our love grew like a rampant force, and it went great for a little over a year, but then I had to go and spoil it (of course). I know you got scared when I was drinking, and I also know that I hurt you very bad, and all I know is that I miss you so, and all I know is that I feel really sad. You never opened up and told me how you felt, instead, you bottled it all up inside, and now your strength wont give me a second chance, after all, a girl does have her pride. But all I ask for is that second chance, I promise another drop will not pass my lips, because I now know that drink is a torpedo, a torpedo that will sink even the best of ships. I remember the butterflies I felt when we first met, they were so bad I found it hard to eat, and now those butterflies have all but flown, they've been forced to beat a hasty retreat. And sometimes you just need to trust, you need to trust in me, trust in our love, because I know I've learned the error of my ways, and now I'm praying to the heavens above. Because I know I've lost something worth dying for, and no matter what, you'll always be in my heart, so Lacie, how about weaving some magic? How about giving this boy another start? |
Allen Jesson
Comments:
"Hey Allen,This poem is perfect I would not want to change a single word!!!! You did an outstanding job thank you for taking the time with it. I know there was a lot of info with it and a good bit of change in my story was made but you really did satisfy me!!!
P.S. You can put my story on your
website if you would like to.
Thanks A Lot,
Todd Price"
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